Comments & Book Review
RWA Contests
Positive Comments from Judges:
RE: “Conquer All Obstacles”
Author: Jo-Anne Vandermeulen
I like the way you describe things so vividly. It really breathes life into your characters.
I thought the dialogue done very well!
The plot is a fresh one.
I really enjoyed your descriptions. They were vivid and I could clearly see how deflated Josh was.
Love your descriptions. I could feel what they felt. Very good at showing!
You have a great voice, and an exciting story to tell.
Excellent use of secondary characters in the second half. I love the hospital setting, the thoughts, the reactions and Dr. Frances. Great job there.
This is honestly not a plot I’ve seen before, so I think if you do some work you could have an excellent story. I LOVE the hospital part. I’m afraid I didn’t leave as many comments there, but only because I was so engaged that I stopped being a judge and instead acted as a reader. I didn’t want that part to end. So. If you rework your beginning, and keep the second part just as strong, I could see you re-entering this into other contests and winning hands down.
Excellent POV. For the most part.
THE PHYSICAL DESCRIPTIONS OF THE COUPLE ARE BEAUTIFUL.
I WAS SWEATING WITH THEM. IT WAS GREAT THE WAY YOU TOUCHED THEM.
THE WRITING IS VERY VIBRANT & EVOCATIVE. I’D LOVE TO READ THE REST OF THE STORY TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS AND HOW.
THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING READ. IT REALLY SWITCHES FROM ONE EXTREME TO THE OTHER.
I TELL YOU, YOU’VE GOT A REALLY GOOD BOOK HERE. THERE IS ONE OTHER THING, SO MANY PEOPLE WITH MENTAL DISEASE. I QUESTION IT, BUT IT’S STILL A GOOD SOUNDING BOOK AND I WISH YOU THE BEST OF LUCK WITH IT .
CONQUER ALL OBSTACLES has been a marvelous exercise for my students, helping them learn analysis, plot mapping, character studies, and line editing. Everyone who has worked on the piece so far has fallen in love with the story, and wants to know when the book will be out. Talk about viral marketing! >Claudia Suzanne Ghostwriting Expert<
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Title: Conquer All Obstacles
Author: Jo-Anne Vandermeulen
ISBN: 978-0-9841680-1-9
Genre: Suspense – Romance
Pages: 256
Reviewed By: Brian Knight
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What would you sacrifice for love?
Tara Robstead is prepared to sacrifice everything to find her true love and her happily ever after. But her journey leads her into the arms of a mad man. Now, strapped to a hospital bed, Tara is in a trauma induced coma. She struggles to save herself from the damages inflicted by a man—the same man she once thought she could love, unaware that her desires will lead her to what is waiting on the other side. However, this is only the tip of the ice berg. As the story unfolds, we see what transpires to lead Tara into her unfortunate situation.
While Tara battles for her life, Josh Henderson has his own demons to deal with. After casting Tara aside for promises of a better career, his life spirals out of control. Only through the agonizing declaration of mistakes made, and need for forgiveness from his family, does Josh realize how important Tara really is. But to have her, he must sacrifice what he thinks is his dream.
In “Conquer All Obstacles” Tara and Josh put it all on the line; but, is the price to high for love?
From the first word, Vandermeulen’s passion for writing and storytelling takes center stage. Instantly, you are immersed in Tara’s life. With each passing page, it is virtually impossible not to care for the characters in “Conquer All Obstacles”. You will find yourself connecting with them on multiple levels.
“Conquer All Obstacles” is an emotional thrill ride as it pulls on the heart strings, fans the flames of anger, and tugs at the smile within. This book is a must have for those with a penchant for an edge of your seat pulse pounding love story.
Author Jo-Anne Vandermeulen’s debut novel, is sure to take the world by storm. I see a bright future for this up and coming author as more titles follow this engaging tale of love and survival.
“Conquer All Obstacles,” will conquer your need for a great love story.
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Rebecca Ryals Russell said
Great opening grabber. Your MC looks interesting even in a coma.
Maryanne Raphael said
Congratulations I am so happy to hear your good news.
Best Wishes Maryanne Raphael Keep me posted
Jo-Anne Vandermeulen said
So great to hear from you, Maryanne. You’re always such an inspiration for me.
Jo
Petra said
Hey, Jo:
I loved reading about your enthusiasm for a new book. It gives me all the encouragement I need to continue with mine until it’s finished.
Petra
Jo-Anne Vandermeulen said
Thanks Petra…you keep going. We’re in this together.
Grady Harp said
Brava, Jo-Anne!
Grady
Valerie said
Congratulations Jo-Anne! You’ve done it. You inspire me to hang in there and push for a publication date of my own. :>)
Jo-Anne Vandermeulen said
You go girl, you go. WE are all in this TOGETHER…:)>.
>Hugs<
Jo